tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974957457697403769.post2978422487081778543..comments2024-03-29T09:30:24.081+13:00Comments on Amelia: SLJ ~ W2 D5 A1/2/3 The Black DrainPES Blogs Admin 2015http://www.blogger.com/profile/00718590749281782598noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974957457697403769.post-9298487482925249462019-01-21T10:27:52.853+13:002019-01-21T10:27:52.853+13:00Kia ora Amelia,
Activity 2: The Black Drain: You d...Kia ora Amelia,<br />Activity 2: The Black Drain: You did an outstanding job here! I liked how you use the Google slide to present your answer as this provide a great method to organise your text in a way that is much more appealing to your readers and also the use of images help your post to become more visual and engaging, well done!<br /><br />Activity 3: Faded Glory: You manage to gather a very creative and big scale range of ideas to help fund raising to protect the Great Barrier Reef, way to go! I specially liked your idea of create a fun park because that could bring awareness to the issue and educate people about initiatives that can be taken in order to preserve this ecosystem. Well done!<br />Keep up with your amazing work! <br />Kia Kaha,<br />Patricia <br />Patricia SLJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02296665285310695270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974957457697403769.post-70558609281878087012019-01-20T10:19:24.659+13:002019-01-20T10:19:24.659+13:00Hey there Amelia, it's Billy here from the Sum...Hey there Amelia, it's Billy here from the Summer Learning Journey team. Thank you for completing another set of activities. It's terrific to see that you have been working so hard over the summer break. <br /><br />I've enjoyed reading your post about whether or not people should be fined $100,000 if they get caught over fishing. I like how you have discussed both sides of the argument. I think that people should only be fined if they are over fishing on a large, commercial scale, meaning they are selling it onto other people. If people continue to over fish then eventually our oceans will depleted of life. It would be such a shame to go to your local fish and chip shop and not be able to buy fish.<br /><br />Have you ever been fishing before?<br /><br />Thanks, Billy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15645088588780464837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5974957457697403769.post-57450743144847056262019-01-12T15:23:06.032+13:002019-01-12T15:23:06.032+13:00Hey Amelia,
Incredible blogging! I am surprised o...Hey Amelia,<br /><br />Incredible blogging! I am surprised on how well your doing and how much effort you are putting into your amazing work. I really enjoyed reading the presentation about polluted rivers in New Zealand. I'd have to say you are doing a wonderful job. The way you presented the presentation and having the Pollution + the Solution of how there going to help fix it is definetly something, I haven't seen before. Do you know any other rivers you know that's polluted in New Zealand? Overall fantastic work, hope to see more blogging from you incredibly soon. Thanks for the post.<br /><br />From,<br />HinerangiHinerangihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11192939772869941695noreply@blogger.com