Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Amelia Narrative writing

Walt: understand the features of narrative writing.
Task Description: We have been learning how to write our own story

Once upon a time there was a girl named Rosey and her brother named Billy. Rosey had blond curly hair, and Billy had a black straight hair.

Billy and Rosey would always fight about who’s the smartest kid in the world. The next morning Billy and Rosey were walking to the park. The park was giant in size, it had 3 swings, and 4 big slides.

As they were walking to the park they were FIGHTING about who’s the smartest kid in the world. When Rosey and Billy got to the park they were AMAZED, They stopped their fight and started to play and jumped around. Until they got to the 3 swings they sat together and they started to fight for a LONG TIME!.
The next minute they were still fighting until……. BOOM BOOM BOOM all of a sudden the earth cracked into 2 pieces because of of the screams from Billy and Rosey's fighting.

They thought about what they had done at the same time so they both said sorry and then……….. WOOO SHSHSHSH all of a sudden the earth was back to what it was before.
Then they started another fight. DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNN!.          

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